Open Poetry #20 |
Golden voice - inspired by Aimster's poem, "Broken Sparrow" |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Golden voice "The angel went to her and said, "Greetings, you who are highly favored! The Lord is with you." NIV Luke 1:28 Life can be so cold and narrow For a lonely broken sparrow For the sky calls come to me Come fly over land and sea. But it is so hard to sing With a wobbly broken wing O God please hear my prayer Mend my wings and take me there. To the stars where angels sing Let me soar as new bells ring And hold their hands as we rejoice With new wings in golden voice. Golden voice. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 18, 2002 ((Amy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. You are an absolutely fabulous writer I love the way you’ve constructed this it’s clearly built of love and founded in the bedrock of compassion. I love the flow the wonder and the voice within. And yes I love it utterly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YES!!! Oh Newell, this is beautiful, actually, my name is Singing Sparrow on other poetry boards, for I am deeply touched by the sparrow and I believe God will always feed all His little sparrows with loving care! (big huggsssss) Ths is breathtaking, sweet friend, I know Amy will love this, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
newell~ this was a beautiful poem...i am so flattered that I inspired you to write something of this mangitude! you have a brilliant way of expressing sometimes difficult emotions, very powerful emotive write!! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Marsha. Your words are honey to my soul. What more can I say than that I am elevated to the stars when you comment on my poems. When you comment, you are an angel from on high pulling me up to where you are. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
And inspire me you did, Amy. And it was a deep honor for me to respond to your deep love and compassion expressed in your poem. And as our spirits fused within your words, I felt a deep compulsion to share my love and your pain. God bless you, Amy. ((Amy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-18-2002 09:24 PM).] |
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