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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-17 02:46 PM

Whence will moon of darkened sky rise
and caste glow of night into view
of two in wrest of passion’s sighs
upon the lawn in soft renew.

Doth not the chill of skin once then
abate from feel and sight from beam
while ways of gents desire to win
the glow of face in sensuous gleam

My lust for thee art surely strong
and cloud the mind of chivalry
The night is right and ride is long
Wilt thee remain, be once for me

Thy quest to keep a virtue true
shall not be cast into the light
as lips desire to feel the dew
thy thirst remains till once is right.

Thee art lady of treasure pure
A gem most rare desired to keep
Lie in thee bed alone endure
I guard, I keep thy soul in sleep

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-04-17 02:49 PM

Oh good sire, a gem wilt thy be
to but travel in the pouch of thee
wish but emerald eyes and ruby lip
and golden chalice from which to sip

all thy treasures before thee, lay
no price too great, your fee to pay

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-04-17 03:52 PM

gotta love it : )
~~ Connie ~~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-04-17 03:53 PM

well done Sir. . . thou hast indeed penned a tale of wonder and light. . .

I raise my sword to thee Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-04-17 04:11 PM

Penned with such grace and beauty

I adored it, I mean who wouldn't fall for those words of chivalry *swoons*

Kristen

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-04-17 04:15 PM

Surely I wouldst take thee up upon this
If it was for me

Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-17 04:37 PM

"Thee art lady of treasure pure
A gem most rare desired to keep
Lie in thee bed alone endure
I guard, I keep thy soul in sleep"

WOW!!! Yes, yes, I love how you depict her love in her heart like the brightness through even the most ebony of darkness, I love it! (smiles) May she always be your North Star and help find you peace always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-17 05:24 PM

Oh my...oh my.
BIG SIGHS!!
~Hugs for this one~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-04-17 05:28 PM

Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows of crystal streams of living light, flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know

You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling man this is utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-04-17 11:28 PM

Hello Barry

My feet still haven't touched the ground after reading this masterpiece! Beautifully written by a gallant gentleman.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-04-17 11:47 PM

Magnus~
I always enjoy reading you~
The title is scrumptious as well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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