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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Let Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Let me be the sunshine that kisses you in early morning A softly-fluttered sigh of reminisce that catches you quite without warning A sweet-cradled thought of soft caress that touches on your eyelashes in slumber The last sheep over your fence of dreams when you're counting them by the number Let me be the reason you greet the dawn a kiss upon your lips sighed in sleepy yawn ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my heart oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling heart? Couldn’t you pause in your soaring to the heavens to let some of us lesser mortals join you? No I suppose you can only write as you can. Truly exquisite writing, I love this rising beauty, YOU really rock darling heart, absolutely ace piece. Bravi Bravi Bravissimi. A spontaneous round of applause here darling, this is perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Let me be the first to say how lovely these thoughts are. Hugs! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bowing humbly to you.... YOU ARE JUST TOOOOOO GOOOOD AT THIS!!! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marge, you are so terrific. I love this fabulously creative poetry. Thank you.  ((Marge)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A wonderful love poem, with an offer no one could refuse. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, How creative and wonderful are your thoughts! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A softly-fluttered sigh of reminisce that catches you quite without warning Marge - I just love the way you allow the words to light upon the paper, seemingly without effort. Wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMarshaLove~ When my heart starts talking My fingers start walking All over the keyboard they roam Finding a place where my words can find a happy home~ (and it's freshly painted too !) MartieSis~ Thank you love ... *hugs*  Magnus~ Gosh .. it's really just poetic-fun ! Thank you for reading my heart~ MidniteSun~ Awwww, that's sweet .. thank you sooooo much~ Chelsea~ Thanks ever so much~ I just let it splash from this overflowing heart~ NightShade~ Thank you ... I truly just turn the inkwell upside down .. and am often surprised at the splash ! *Hugs* to all of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where the heck did you find a multi-colored inkwell? *S* In spite of the fact that this is a relatively short poem, so many phrases touch my heart with their unique beauty... and then there's the visual impact. *S* I like this so very much. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (04-17-2002 04:32 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ Somewhere in the early light of day this one came to gently play Upon a heart in kaleidoscopic hues of a sweet memory or two~ I so very glad to share it with you~ *Hugs* my sweet friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I'm sure you are all these lovely things to your one and only plus a whole bunch more! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ AWWWW! . You are just chock-full of sweetness! I *love* this. It's going into my library for sure. It's such a joy to read.*hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I sure try ! SmittenKitten~ I'm glad, truly glad that you enjoyed it that much~  *It's another GREAT day to be a poet~ (and I'm still getting my packing done)  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Another soft and lovely vision of love....what a dawning... Lauren~ Step through the |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you for the lovely comment~ 'a lovely dawning' ... I like that~ VanDana~ Thanks so much hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, OK  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I love it when you give in soooooo easily~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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