Open Poetry #20 |
Circle The Circle shape poem |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circle The Circle Circle the circle Unbroken circle shows the way, guides the heart to place to stay. Frees the soul from shadowed care. Gifts mind with the when and where. Lift’s the lid on futures view Sees the promise of me and you. Don’t hold back on what you seek. Look within take a peek. Two becomes the strength of one bound together life begun. Joined in harmony, United in love’s eternity linked circle’s of purity. Showing a part of circles grace. A symbol for the human race. Unbroken circle complete and whole. The mirror of the perfect soul. No gaps to let the evil in. No imperfection in its skin. Now link the circles and form a chain. Two together will keep out rain. Strength lies in soul’s unity. A hope of what could be. One alone can walk too far. Two can see the guiding star. Hearts don’t need to lift their voice. Soul’s together have more choice Separate the links, they are complete. But together the chain won’t fear defeat. Circle the circle Marsha Krissy beloved daughter I think you’ll find that puts me so far ahead of you that you’ll be eating my dust for a little while yet. I would say that’s about 100 points wouldn’t you? Mmmmm? You can try to catch up if you like. Try as hard as you like darling To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-17-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well just shut my mouth and circle me in.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You've done an AMAZING job on the beauty of this piece~ You KNEW I'd love it ... and you're oh, so right ! Beautifully sculpted dear poetess~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, this is so beautiful both in form and expression...i also love the blending of colors...very beautiful to the eye! yes this will be a hard one for krissy to beat, but i sure look forward to watching the magic from her pen too!! love you both. amy "you can't stop |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl, this is a fabulous piece of art that could only come from you. I am dazzled by your talent and joyfully imbibe the wine of your pen. You are fanatastic, terrific and beautiful as well. It is an honor just to read your beautiful words of enlightenment. I thank Him for your blessed poetry. This is no beginnng; there is no end When we all join in spirit everywhere Only joy and peace when circling friends Giving love, making more pure beauty there. And so, I do, accept your hand in joy To join your circle, dancing to His gait For I believe all happiness employs Pure love we share in circling heaven's gate. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
"let the circle be unbroken" Well done. Enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, may you and your daughter forever bond together in the circle of love and forever find true happiness in each other! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, now let us see what Krissy has up her sleeve, hehehehehe! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
This is certainly a tough act to follow! Great. "I think I go home." |
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