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Happy Ending (just a fantasy)
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Happy Ending (just a fantasy) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He called to me, a ghost in time I knew the planets had aligned of course I flew to him in haste I could not wait, his lips to taste. He pulled me straight into his arms and swore to take away all harm it was as though I never left forgot those nights I cried bereft. Our souls collided in the night he shared with me a brilliant light a passion born of magics' kiss a fullsome dream-a love like this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes...our fantasies can easily become our reality...who knows what each new day holds...perhaps a happy beginning...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Fairy tales can come true it can happen to you ..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) It may just be a fantasy for you now, but I know very soon it will become a true story and love will make all your dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I wish this dream to come true for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon, To dream or not to dream, is that the question? Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A dream is a wish your heart makes...." Beautiful Sandra...and you just never know! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sandra, what a dreamy poem, I loved it. floria Floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sandra - it's OK to have a fanasty, more than one even. I wish you the best... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
magnificent...see it, be it! All love to you. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, it is nice seeing a poem that even as a fantasy, as you say....does carry a ray of hope within it...Nice write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Dreams, fantasies and imagination are our blueprints for tomorrow's realities. Be sure to make them sweet with love. -Silver Streak. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you can have a fantasy, you still have hope....that's a GOOD thing! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He called to me, a ghost in time It is hard to resist giving into the ghost's that haunt our past. But since it's your fantasy I say, have at it Sandra!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ I know this all too well....the ending and the happier times....I am still searching...you said this in a way that touched me....  Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-08-2002 11:52 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
reach into the shadow and pull you from dreams to dream places enjoyed it lady |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I smile and smile and smile. Loving this! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Catalinamoon~ sigh-worthy write...I love to read happy endings, and hope that they do come true. Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, I enjoyed the read, to dream is what we all do, there is love out there, one needs to fight the cocoon skin till it breaks, find the front door and enter life once again, living on the past does not bring a future, friends have friends, a smile brings on conversation and who knows what comes from that. Good luck. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra, it seems that some of our dreams are more inviting than reality.........loved this one, as I do everything that you write..~s~ The road goes on forever, and the stories never end! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to echo Sy. . . "to dream, perchance to wake. . . " wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
(((cat))) I hug ya sweetie this poem is precious... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (05-01-2002 01:35 AM).] |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Clap ... Clap ... Clap I love this! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Fantasies sprinkle reality and the Present comes with time .... Time is warped, it bends and folds creating repeats of history unknown. I believe your Charming searches these unknowns as you sleep beautifully.  |
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