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- I Stand on Guard For Thee - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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This is meant to be both serious and cutsey, so please do not get offended, it's dedicated to those who pass judgement upon what they know very little about I Stand On Guard For Thee I live in a house, not an igloo get it straight, I don't say 'Eh!' I am not obliged by the fourth of July, I celebrate Canada day!  We have provinces, not states, by the way, it's zed not zee, we don't solely consume beer and bacon, we do more than just hockey We don't say 'aboot' instead of about, frostbite is not a cause of demise. We're mostly English, not French, we are peaceful, dilligent and wise I don't own a pair of snowshoes nor a coat lined with fur, I drive a car not a dog sled, these are myths, I concur For, your preconceived notions can never crush my soul, this is Canada the magnificent, it is not the North Pole We're blessed with all four seasons not winter all year round we have the seventh wonder of the world and walk on heaven's ground We have a primeminister, not a president, get yourself an education!  Only then will you know the truth and the beauty of my nation You try to shackle me with lies as a slave to your ignorance, I'm sure that your country is great but let go of that arrogance!  Much of what you claim is false, simple minded jealousy, I'll strut my stuff against your stereotypes as you pout incessantly All I can say is 'duh!' Don't diss my grace of birth! Gawd, how dense can you be? Welcome to planet earth! Welcome to reality, I'll shout it loud and clear! I'll defend her name 'til the end, this land I love so dear Nyah, nyah, I'm a Canuck!  'Tis a boast you can't subside, you can't silence the glory of a heart that's filled with pride I come from a priceless place the home of strong and free, O Canada, Utopia, I stand on guard for thee with hand over chest, devoted to the death forever to inhale sweet majesty's breath  By Melissa P. Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-17-2002 11:52 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I come from a priceless place the home of strong and free, O Canada, Utopia, I stand on guard for thee with hand over chest, devoted to the death forever to inhale sweet majesty's breath"   (smiles) Oh Melissa, I understand with all my heart what you were trying to get across in your words, and while I am American, I love Canada so very much and dream of spending many vacations up there! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautifully patriotic piece to your nation, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-16-2002 11:25 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
your pride in your home is wonderful!! I wish more folks would take pride in their lands be them here, or there.....very well said Melissa I enjoyed this |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melissa, Well aren't you just the best citizen I've heard from in ages! You go girl. I'm one American that is proud to call you friend and neighbor. ROTFLMBO Struttin' the attitude tonight.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You may not drive a dogsled but I love your mush!! Go get 'em, tigress!!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Noah, Susan and Larry ~ It's a poem that just had to be written. Thanks for indulging in my little rant  tee hee! I'm just in a sassy mood tonight.My mom always says that when I was born I came out with a Canadian flag in my hand and a head full of brown hair. LOL You see, I'm probably the proudest Canadian and brunette that ever lived My friends and family here will certainly agree.I am glad that no one is offended, especially the Americans. I was worried that I might ruffle some feathers and I would never want to insult an 'innocent' person. I just cherish the fact that I reside in a first world nation such as Canada, and I am so tired of all the stereotypes that come along with it. Thank God that you three are intelligent and kind enough to know the truth Anyways, I have a silly story for you...which is the icing on the cake as to why I wrote this poem! My aunt travelled to California and Texas last year to visit two close friends in each state. When my aunt went to Texas, she was wearing a 'Canada' shirt, and one man in the street screamed out "we don't want any of you Frenchies here, go back to your igloo!" My aunt rebutted herself with a very clever reply and walked away. When she went to California, she was walking with her friend and her friend's cousin, and the cousin actually was dumb enough to ask my aunt "do you have forks and Wal-mart in Canada? And why does it snow in the summer?" My aunt almost died of shock and laughter. Anyways, I'll shut up now Don't worry, I'm not saying that ALL Americans are like this, but, unfortunately there's a few people all over the world even, that are just plain ignorant of the truth. How sad for us all! Geez, did I just write a novel heheTake care!~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A certain cutie patootie snuck in there while I was writing a novel heheThanks a million 'Deer!  I've formed many friendships with American poets here, and you're all a breath of fresh air! Your intelligence, support and sweetness is much appreciated! Anyways, I hope you know what I mean, don't worry I'm not stereotyping anyone lolMaybe we can all be proud to be North Americans? "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-17-2002 12:22 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WAY TO GO MELISSA!! What a wonderful tribute to 'our' country. I back everything you say 100%! I have found that in some European countries though when they find out you are from Canada they do treat you royally... they do love the Canadians.... *Okay, back to my igloo in this 85 degree weather!* ~Big Canadian hugs to you!~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
hehe you know I'd rather be in Canada *whispers* Don't you just hate those arrogant ppl? My dad used to constantly pick on my stepmum and stepbrother because they are from Ontario but I heard that they are going to retire up there without us!! so he changed his tune:P anyways I loved it..it was cute and serious..thanks for the share.. Kristen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great job Melissa. . . I've always liked Canada. . . been there a few times too. . . it's neat to cross the Ambassador or Blue Water Bridges and into another country. . . people should know that there's more to Canada than Maple Leafs and hockey. . . there's an entire way of life. . . one that's survived for generations. . . some of my best friends are Canadian, and they've taught me what it means to be proud of your country, and what your place in the world is. . . ok, this is way too long. . . but, you know what I mean. . . shine on Canadian jewel. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, I despise abject stupidity, and I thnk Canada seems like a nice place. My Grandma was born in St Camille Quebec,and I want to go there someday. I am woefully ignorant about Canadian life, but I'm looking for a nicer country. Think the Canadians would take me?? Sandra |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I liked this! I'm with you, stereotypes are incredibly stupid. Nicely done, Melissa, and thanks for the story. It made me  skyI'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
You go girl! I would expect something like this from you, and, I'm a proud Cdn, but, you're the proudest one of us all! This rocks! [This message has been edited by Chelsea~ (04-18-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is for everyone who replied!Enchantress ~ Well my fellow canuck, 'tis a grand country to be proud of isn't it?! It was 90 degrees today...arrrg, could it be any more humid, it's melting the icicles on my igloo heheThey reported in the weather report today that Southern Ontario was hotter than Texas and Louisiana...I just realized that I need to get an inground pool...with exotic men in thongs feeding me grapes Ceinwyn ~ Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed my little ditty. Sven ~ And that's why you're the sven pen, you genius you! And I'm glad to call you my friend. Sandra ~ You've just been named an honourary Canadian by me! And yes, Canada would gladly take a kind person like you. And, although Canada and The U.S.A are seperate nations with a few differences, we really are basically the same. Skyshine ~ Thanks for the read, and yes, misconceptions drive me nuts too! The funny thing is, when a person stereotypes another, in turn, they end up looking like the fool...that's the best revenge. Chels ~ I'm naming Canada Day as officially 'my day' woo hoo I can't wait to 'par-tay,' baby! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-19-2002 12:11 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How can we not love Canada ... some of passions finest and dearest to my heart are from there.... tis it something in the water? Wonderful poem of pride Melis. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
MelissaBee~ YAY!  You said it girly! lol@the needing a pool and exotic men Can I come over? But what are you doing saying the temperature in Farenheit? Loved this poetess! *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I, your neighbor to the south....think this is a very good statement...and I am proud to have you and any other Canadians as my neighbor.... |
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