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In my Dreams
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In my Dreams |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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You came to me last night and wrapped around my dreams dancng our last dance you took my hand and held me close then you let me go.... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured a lovely picture in my mind's eye with this piece BluesSerenade ... much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (04-07-2002 01:00 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good morning Kit~ dreams are something special to draw upon aren't they? Thanks for reading. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, a special dream indeed...this was so soft and tender. i enjoyed reading it very much take care. amy "you can't stop |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A wondrous image with a painful sadness at the end...in some ways, that parting could be a release to be who you are meant to be..yet, it felt like loss to me. This gripped my heart with gladness and then sadness. Was that your intent? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How sweet and sad a dream. Last night I dreamed the cat got sucked up in the vacuum. No poetry there! LMAO |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I too feel saddened when that happens to so many! (kiss on cheek) I hope now true love again graces your heart and dances with you everyday, sweet friend, we all love you so uch! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, this is exactly perfect. I have these dreams often, and it is such a shame to wake up and look at the way it really is. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori, not sure just why this touched me so deeply but it left me with a lump in my throat. Beautiful....just beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh how I know this feeling...to have so much hope and to find yourself alone...but not recently thank God...James |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
the dance dark room bit by somber reflection erased pure light and shadow eyes meet the dance complete.........really liked this poem blues |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lori....a beautiful dream....even as it ends. Maybe to again be felt... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lori, dreams like this make you want to close your eyes again. Sweet dreams, Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ Sigh~ awww I have had this dream a few times, wanting to never awaken..soft and very tender these words...HUGSSS Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-08-2002 08:14 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - if we were to dance, I wouldn't let you go... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
BluesSerenade...Lovely short piece. So very much said with so few words. ***Ivy Rose |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Blues this is so wonderful. I hope he didnt let go for long. Wonderful write. floria Floria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Amy~ I could have danced all night, on the other hand I should be greatful for the extra hour. Thanks Amy~ VAS~ My dream just happened that way, and yes, it made me very happy and then it suddenly ended. At that point I figured it was time to get out of bed. Thanks.Duncan~ You're a riot Duncan. In this case I'm glad to know it was only a dream, and I'll bet your cat is pretty happy about that too. Thanks for the laugh~ Noah~There is no controlling our dreams, I kind of like where they take me, after all, it's the thrill of them all. Thanks~ Sandra~ Dreams are an escape without having to pay for them, but it is hard when they end and reality sets in. Thanks Sandra Nancy~ Thank you for understanding, I was obviously caught up in the aftermath. You're so sweet Nancy~ James~ Good for you, it's a whole lot better to share our dreams with someone. Thanks for sharing your happiness. Mark~ I really appreciate your poetic reply, that was awful nice of you. Thanks. Magnus~ Yes I am going to bed early tonight just to give it some time. You never know, it might get even better. Thanks Dee~ Isn't that the truth! I have closed my eyes and tried to get it back before but it's not the same, it's like forcing it and that takes all the spontaneity out of a good dream. Nice to see you Dee and thank you~ Lauren~ It really sucks huh? At that point I want to pull the covers over my head and make the world go away. *hugs* Lauren~ BC~ That was nice of you to say, but I must confess, I'm really not a very good dancer. Ivy Rose~ It was short and oh so sweet! Thank you so much for reading. Floria~ I think he just likes to watch me toss and turn, or keep me spinning! I've no illusions but I am such a dreamer!! The truth is I would be lost without them. Thank you Floria dear~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-07-2002 10:12 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Short and bittersweet, Lori.... I dream a lot, but usually don't remember them. Great writing  ~dreamy hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't remember details, unless it's really good, then I reach the end and I want say, "hey, I'm done yet" Thanks Lyra~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, The way I see it...you slept too long! I hate that.  Great write. |
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