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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-08 12:58 PM

the bird feeder,
a metronome,
ticks away the moments
of a spring breeze,

passing time,
sun,
shadows,
a call for April rain,
yet for now,
it is time only
that passes

tick
tock
click
clock

©April 7, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (04-08-2002 01:00 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-08 01:10 PM

VAS,
Sometimes it feels like that, enjoyed.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-04-08 02:52 PM

A clock driven bird feeder, or did I miss the point?
I got a Ka-pow out of this

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-08 02:56 PM

hehehe,
well maybe you did,

my bird feeder was
tick-tocking back and forth
in the gale force winds, yesterday,
looking like a metronome

it made me muse
and write this weird poem

glad you got a ka-pow!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-04-08 03:30 PM

NOW I get it ...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-04-08 04:44 PM

Cool write Virginia!
I think we have to post explanations
with our poems for Interloper! Ha!

Another short and to the point kind that I love!
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-08 05:02 PM

(smiles) This is soooooo wonderfully inventive, sweet friend, your words always have such innovations and inspiration! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-04-08 06:06 PM

Very nice VAS and I am hoping it ticks a little faster into spring, It is raining so hard here today. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2002-05-01 01:33 AM

i enjoyed this read...i have "tick tock tick tock" going in my head now...

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2002-05-01 06:23 PM

i thought i would come back to better express how i felt when i was reading this...

you know, how the scene freezes when you are watching MTV and the camera kind of zooms in on one object which is incidentally the only object still moving...that was how i felt towards this bird feeder..

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