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Poet Drink Me dedicated to my favourite poets
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Poet Drink Me dedicated to my favourite poets |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Poet Drink Me taste the wine divine within this cup drink up. Toast my eyes In liquid sighs, my lips in tasty delicate sips.Take from the rim my softest kiss then drink of this place your lips there with such care, breathe across the liquid spill of loving thrill. Touch lip to rim and sip me in take me unto you in thought of true. Lift me up in cup of ruby wine with taste sublime I am drink of poets ink. The thought sought that flows just glows with richest red into your head. Come drink me Krissy this is dedicated to my favourite poets I love you poetic aunts uncles, cousins and sisters Thank you for you inspiration always And for my mum I say THANK YOU I love you always I’m still winning though And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (04-08-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a lovely presentation! *S* Well done, Krissy! *S* |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Gosh, Krissy, I aways knew your mom was awesome. So I guess God knew it too. And decided to keep her a bit longer by creating you. Reckon? Although God did have a bit more exerience in making wonderful women when he made you. Shhhh. Don't let her here me. She might be jealous. Hehe.. You are fantastic, Krissy. Keep writing! And drawing! ((Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-08-2002 11:47 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Krissy- this is such beautiful poetry! i love the creativity of it all.. very fine writing indeed...you just keep getting better and better. and you got me to smile, so thank you!! take care. love you. amy  "you can't stop |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Nice Job... Beautiful Words... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, A remarkable write, and an entertaining presentation. Enjoyed. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a wonderful creation this is...  You and your poetry are so shapely! Your words are beautiful, Krissy, and as long as there are those who thirst for poetic wine, there will be poets to fill their cups. May yours overflow....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKrissy~ This 'auntie' is SO PROUD of you~ I could just burst a seam of HAPPY~ Girlie ... this is an amazing write. And of course you 'knew' I'd want another sip~ You go gal .... I love it ! Positively LOVE IT~  *HUGs* ~*Marge*` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wow! A beautiful poem, and in shape-so creative. You should be proud, Krissy, I know your mom is. Nan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well well well....deep, aren't you?  Now I challenge you to do a poem in the form of an inkwell...I would think someone with all of this talent would find that easier to do than snapping beans...and oh by the way, did I say I like this? Very much so! Keep it up! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS EXCELLENT, SWEET FRIEND, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your gorgeous heart is always an endless well of love and inspiration, sweet friend, may we all raise a toast to each other in poetic friendship! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done indeed Krissy. . . very well done. . . can't wait to see if you do Sunshine's challenge. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Krissy, And the poet brothers are what... Awesome presentation both visually and verbally. A delightful drink, I mean poem. Thanks. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful shape poem Krissy! Very creative and well done! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love this Krissy, very beautifully done and proud to have you here at PiP among us.... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Krissy this is the sweetest thing I have ever seen, thank you for this. floria Floria |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, you did it! I'm so proud of you. I knew you could. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Now I can't decide... I just looked at your Mum's and now your's .... You've both done incredible work with words!!! I think this is fantastic... even a little on the sensual side.... (don't tell you mum I said that)... you have really gotten into the spirit here...No pun intended.... Great work, Krissy!!!!! keep it up. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You have amazing talent, Krissy..... This is so beautiful..,both the words and the presentation...... You are truly your mother's daughter... but you have your very own talent. ~lots of liquid hugggsssss~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Krissy, this is very cool. I love it. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krissy - I love this. I see you taught mum how to do these, Nice work.... BC |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Very creative use of sips! Beautiful layout! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Krissy~ Your creativity overflows Pour on!~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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