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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-04-08 11:22 AM


God's Love's in her heart.

Pondering, pondering who should I say
I'll love you, my darling; lead me your way
Walk a new journey forever in love
Living in happiness in God, above.

Girl one lives single, a home on the sea
Drinks of finer wine; pretty as can be
A life of freshness in softness she sighs
Following eagles, and sea gulls that fly.

She thinks there's no God, man myths does she see
She once took a shine to poor godly me
Live's free as the breeze, a beautiful girl
With long flowing hair, a wonderful pearl.

Girl two lives married, a house by the hills
Struggles from abuse, misery and pills
She searches for God and struggles to live
Helps ev'ry body, she searches and gives.

Her children are angels, pure shining glows
Shared with an ex she no longer knows
And searches to find God's way to new peace
Living in agony, she seeks release.

Both girls are treasures, girl one I must part
Girl two is my choice, God's Love's in her heart.

God's Love's in her heart.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida


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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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VAS
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1 posted 2002-04-08 12:49 PM


I don't know at all what to say, but I wanted you to know I read this piece.

I guess we just have to remember who will be blessed eternally.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-04-08 02:39 PM


Thank you, VAS. When others are blessed by our love on earth we receive our true rewards in eternity.

((VAS))
-newell

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-04-08 02:50 PM


Well done my friend

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-04-08 02:58 PM


Thank you!

((Interloper))
-newell

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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-04-08 06:16 PM


Well now this was awesome Newell, Girl 2 must be a real jewel, and of course she is she has God in her heart. Lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-08 06:39 PM


Hi floria, thanks for you sweet thoughts.

((floria))
-newell

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Marsha
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7 posted 2002-04-08 08:03 PM


Newell darling boy what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of  writing this is  darling heart it’s exquisite. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again HIS light inspires such divine writing in you darling heart, your love for HIM clearly rings through this wonderful beautiful poem. Girl 2 will live in love eventually Girl 1 I’ll pray will find The Way.

Excellent writing absolutely excellent

I love it utterly utterly utterly.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-04-08 08:11 PM


Thank you for your soothing words of honey Marsha, sweet pen of my heart.

((Marsha))
-newell

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9 posted 2002-04-08 08:19 PM


Interesting and enlightening, Newell.
Sandra

Silver Streak
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10 posted 2002-04-08 08:24 PM


Thank you, Sandra!

((Sandra))
-newell

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Bill Charles
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11 posted 2002-04-08 09:32 PM


Newell - this is one of the most touching poems I have read. God's love is not only in her heart, it is also in yours...

BC

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12 posted 2002-04-08 09:36 PM


Thank you, Bill. That is probably the nicest thing that anyone has ever said to me. The poem is only fictional, although it is based on real life inspiration.

((BC))
-newell

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13 posted 2002-04-08 09:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, yes, and I agree with Bill, you too have a heart that is rich in His love like Girl #2! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always sunshine to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-04-08 09:43 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts!

((Noah))
-newell

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Saunni
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15 posted 2002-04-08 11:12 PM


Newell, what can I say besides you have the heart of an angel, and the words that are magic to the ears. You are surely an inspiration to me, and to MANY others here and everywhere. I hope Girl two gives you all the love you so deserve and more. She sure knows you are one blessed MAN with that heart of yours and the way you present it to people. God shines in you all the way and NEVER change. For, you shine, and believe me, you shine! From my heart to yours, Newell, love ya beyond words, My Friend.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Silver Streak
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16 posted 2002-04-08 11:21 PM


Thank you, Sauni. I am deeply humbled and honored by your kind words, friend. You are a wonderful person full of much love.

((Sauni))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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