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craigrk
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since 2001-12-23
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0 posted 2002-04-16 02:06 AM

    

That next new concept,
the one you’ve never known,
or to recapture forgotten vintage -
that next unique high,
the one you’ve never known,
or to be more precise
the you you’ve never tried.

Then through the clamor
of the coked-up crowd
of which you’re not a part,
a glimpse of some delicious past -

a face to covet unlike the many,
an entity that stirs the lust
of ancient and albinoed soul,
the adrenaline of the Infidel.
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-04-16 02:39 AM

whoa...

That next new concept,
the one you’ve never known,
or to recapture forgotten vintage -
that next unique high,
the one you’ve never known,
or to be more precise
the you you’ve never tried.

The you you've never tried. This touches on something I've been pondering much lately!
and oh, I DO also love, "the adrenaline of the Infidel"!

Ya got me thinking...DAMN.
Severn
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2 posted 2002-04-16 07:12 AM

Interesting...I like this...thought I'd let you know lol..

K
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-04-16 09:05 AM

Excellent thoughts written here.
Enjoyed...well done.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2002-04-16 09:38 AM

Craig Hi there, this is exceptional writing the inspire simply pours from your poem, so well written I really did enjoy this.

Excellent writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-04-17 09:01 PM

Conforming is a thing of the past and I liked how you set your poem apart.

nice~
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-04-17 10:05 PM


What Serenity said...
craigrk
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7 posted 2002-04-18 10:18 AM

thanks all for the read and comments
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