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She Walks The Celestial Ebon
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She Walks The Celestial Ebon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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She Walks The Celestial Ebon ~*Marge Tindal*~ She walks the celestial ebon adorned in star-clad clime quilling phrases of delight Waltz of prissy glowing across a gossamer night Paint of slivered wonder Upon yon velvet sky Stars in soft abeyance Curtsey within a sigh Scatter-beams of oft' shifting light glimmering upon her path She comes in phasing-grace draped in moonlight shafts From New Moon to Full in feathered phrases borne She quills the poems of poetic adorn~ Silking across the Universe Increasing fractional faces Within her light poets unified Writing her glorious phases~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! I love the phrasing and the presentation in this. Starlight, starbright, Marge is twinkling for us tonight.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 never once cease to amaze me *shaking head, sighing* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have outdone yourself! This is such fun to read and look at--and it paints a path to follow as well... oh man, but I'm having fun reading tonight! (er...this morning?  )HUGS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ Thank you dear ... It just romped through my inkwell~ Dixie~ Awwww, thank you for that lovely comment~ Serenity~ LOL ... thanks gal~ Me having fun too~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Aunitie Margie girl, my favourite painter of dreams, this is incredible writing, I love this I really do. You are an amazing writer, and this is an incredibly beautiful piece from you it flows with such a lovely soft flow. Could this be any smoother? I don’t think so, excellent writing. Well done I really admire the skill of this, and it’s sooooooooo pretty thank you another inspire from you   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ Oh she flowed so gently in her cresting sliver~ She had to be penned~ You are so filled with creative thoughts just waiting to flow~ I'm enjoying each morsel you send my way~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I love how you write about me Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LunaTic~ AND I love it when you flow into my well of Luna-Ink~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
MoonGirly~ I love when the moon inspires you This is such a fun and lovely write! You're pure magic Marge *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are the cream in my poetic coffee. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Thank you ... seems the phasing finds my phrasing constantly~ SweetSeymour~ Awwwwwwwww ... now that's a sweet thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: The moon is so inspiring, but not many can write about her as you can! Outstanding work! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Paint of slivered wonder Upon yon velvet sky Stars in soft abeyance Curtsey within a sigh ============================== only you could come up with a phrase like "Curtsey within a sigh" ... how cool is that. this is lovely Marge, in phrasing as well as presentation. how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
marge...I love this it's totally a trip to lunar fantasies and the moon just what is it about that moon?????...mark |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Oh ... I sincerely thank you, my friend~ It seems she just spills her phrases so eloquently ... I'm just here to catch them and share~ JanetMarie~ You doll ... you ! Well ... those stars curtsied just like that .. honest Injun ~ Thank you honey .... good to see you~ MarkC~ Thank you VERY much~ That little moonie just talks to me~ She stretches 'cross the night in stellar smiles pauses for just a little while Sets poets hearts to knowing the beauty of her glowing Then before rise of sun one more peek, then she's done~ LunaLoveHugs to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Just gorgeous what you do, with the moon and so many other things. Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Isn't it WONDERFUL to have so much fun doing what we do ? I just find life so full of beautiful things to share~ Gawd ... I'm glad to be a poet ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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