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Makeshift Chivalry |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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As if they were flowing from the mouths of rivers somewhere near. They bring alive the memories of creatures that are still all too clear. The voices of the lost echo in my head as they whisper in my ear. It is as if they were friends, not so far gone, but standing right here. [This message has been edited by Effigy (04-15-2002 04:55 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is powerfully said, sweet friend, I too feel that deep down our forefathers spirits will always be a part of our memories and their presences will always greet us with love and their endless stories! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wes, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've read this a few times, and must confess that I'm not sure what your intent was--but I did get a feeling of ancestry of a sort. Behind my house is a park full of ancient cypress, and as I stand beneath those trees, I always think, "Pirates!" This reminded me of that. I thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I heard dinosaurs.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like this. It has a sense of mystery to it, yet I could hear the spirits of the past whispering from the mouths of the rivers. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Well I guess we can all have our own little interpretations. |
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