Open Poetry #20 |
Changing Places |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“CHANGING PLACES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I often wondered if we were to change places, and I were you, and you were me, if you would then know how my heart weeps… ~~~~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bill hi there welcome back home, YOU were missed you know. This is an excellent poem from you, you are a very superior writer. You write so well about romance and hearts, I wish I had a little of your talent. This is wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your pen translated feelings from your heart quite well..... ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I believe so ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, you by far one of the most romantic and sensitive friends I've ever had, this made me cry too because I know this feeling. I love my Joanna so so much and I always feel as though we are the same person inside, and the only difference is I'm a boy and she's a girl, and just thinking how she thinks for me makes me cry in joy! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, she is so very lucky to have a true compassionate lover like you, we all love you so much! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but yet. . . well done my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Perhaps, perhaps, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, I suppose I would... Well done Bill... love these short thoughts. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...I've often thought how unique it would be to exchange lives, places,with someone else. Then to know and experience all they feel. WONDERFUL POEM!!! A poem of the heart and the soul. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill this is a great idea, Oh wouldn't it be nice if that could happen and people could then see how they treat us. I read a book once,where they said that when you die, you will "feel" all the hurt you put on others. I always wonder if this is true, and you'd better believe I am carefull. I don't want a whole lot of this stuff waiting for me. LOL..nice serious heartfelt write. floria Floria |
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