Open Poetry #20 |
That Kinda Love (Should Be A Crime) |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"That Kinda Love (Should Be A Crime)" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: Right from day one you lead me down a tight cold and dark ally Where you stabbed me in the back with your attitude just like that No warning no signs at all you just laughed while you watched me fall I was filled with devotion But you silenced my emotions C: That kinda love should be a crime, Falling apart, I'm dead inside. Why did I fall in love with you, Dial 911, I need a clue... (2x) V2: I was a man of my word turned that against me made me hurt I though we were gonna (love) But you stripped my of my honor Pushed me up against the wall you could make my heart beg and crawl Down on all four like a dog you knew the password to my lock Re-Chorus: Bridge: Now I'm pounding on a why Why did I hook up with you Why didn't I say goodbye Why did I hide the truth I don't know why, I'm still pounding...On that why. Re-chorus: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I was filled with devotion But you silenced my emotions" I know this part well, great write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Brian, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I too am saddened to see so any face this kind of supposed crime every day and I only wish we would have the ability to scrutinize fate and identify whether ones love is real or if they are trying to take us as a victim in heartbreaks hostage! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is an excellent song bound to be a hit, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hey guys, Thanks alot for your read and sweet and kind words "Hitsong" it has a nice ring to it, well, I'm still dreaming...But hey that's a good thing. Well, thanks alot for your time!! Best Wishes, Brian. |
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