Open Poetry #20 |
In Hopes Of |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
In Hopes Of Sandals worn From the dry Desert sand They trudge Lips parched Hair clings With sweat As thejourney Continues Continues Keep moving In hopes of An Oasis Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 April 14. 2002 3AM |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent! Connie, you write very well... for it being in the middle of the night. I can't, and wish I could. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you will find that oasis and there you will find all your dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I am delighted to read your work again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ I greatly enjoyed the way you developed this~ 'Keep moving In hopes of An Oasis' WONDERFUL ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You .... All My son and I were listening to his new CD driving down the road and this came to mind... I forgot all about it until the middle of the night ... Thanks Again ~~ Connie ~~ |
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