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Mirror in Shimmer
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Mirror in Shimmer |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Mirror in Shimmer Little knows what sees the mirror When the days of past come near In the far flung days of yore Looking back is reaching fore Shimmer ripples upon the lake Cast ye stone for pleasures sake Play the game of let’s pretend Hear the willow as she bends Prairie winds are seen by eye As the grasses ripple sighs We know the elephant by his name We stay to play the ancient game Little know what I shall see When your eyes mirror me Shimmer me within your spell Keep me safe, and very well ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 14 April 2002 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
smiling, and loving this and the magic feel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
love the feel of this...very nice KJ.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Little know what I shall see When your eyes mirror me Shimmer me within your spell Keep me safe, and very well ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Karilea...this is magical  Wonderful flow...enjoyed much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sunshine...Enjoyed this piece very much. EXCELLENT FLOW!!!! Your words dance across the heart and touch the soul. ***Ivy Rose |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A jungle beat met me as I toured the images here. Wise and wonderful. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Shimmer ripples upon the lake Cast ye stone for pleasures sake Play the game of let’s pretend Hear the willow as she bends"   (smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I too know this feeling so very well, and I dream ever so uch to see my loves face beside mine staring into the water amorously and seek to find that afterglow on the water! (sigh) Your words always reflect such radiant poetic mastery, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKarilea~ How very, very pretty~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul, , I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Yes I know I always say that but then you always write to utter perfection. I was going to say yes well I s'pose this is okay but of course it’s much more than just okay isn’t it? Are you wonderful? Is the sky still the home of the sun, does the sea still lap the shore? Then yes darling you are wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the places one goes in their mind when they look out windows of day to the distant shores of tomorrow interesting view here ms |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
TO PLAY THE ANCIENT GAME....i'M READY SUNSHINE......MARK |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Enjoyed! ...especially... "Looking back is reaching fore" Very wise, dear Sunshine! Shenachie |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sunshine~ the sun casts on the rippled surface and bounces to and fro it touches everything in sight bringing light wherever it goes Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This IS so very pretty...a calming read, but still sensual. A big MMmmmmmm here! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Now I'm SWOONING! Holy cow...I love this. A keeper for me for sure. Love it, love it, love it. Wow. Awesome. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, this mirror would show only the best. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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