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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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gently tracing lines from brow to lips linger's design transforming urgency to still-- quicksilver mercury in spill and back again... his neck in crane he whispered-- urgently (my name) sweet sustain of liquid fire shameless hips slaves of desire... in gloss of seed erase all trace of loyalty... silken certainty remiss as I am birthed within his kiss-- amazed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
he whispered-- urgently (my name) sweet sustain of liquid fire shameless hips slaves of desire... Satin lips, in gloss of seed erase all trace of loyalty... silken certainty remiss as I am birthed within his kiss-- amazed... ========================= yes...you are(back again) ... and so I say vials baby...send vials  ohhowilovewhenyourhymelikethis |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you are back with a vengence, lovely one....write more...and read lots....there's been some wonderfully good stuff recently and you shall enjoy....oh how you shall enjoy.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw...forgive my exuberence! grinning...it's like Willy Wonka and the Wizard of Oz! That's my last post (i think) and yes, kari--I will be reading more, and hitting the archives as well! Now I think I'll give you guys a break from me. Don't wanna love ya'll to death. heh heh heh (I HAVE been accused of that before...)  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Such joy of love fills your words, sweet friend, I am delighted to see you writing such beautiful poetry again, you sure know how to make an entrance again and again! (kiss on cheek) May love always fill your heart and make all your dreams come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You're back again alright! Oh so sensual write! Wow!...Enjoyed much. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
serenity...this is just OUTSTANDING!!!! So beautifully written and so flawless in its rhythms. ***Ivy Rose |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Hi, Missing Lady! We missed ya around here. What an exceptional way to start off your return. Giving this a bump because everyone needs to know you're around again so they won't miss your work.! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very well done!  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yummy hugs, with much gratitude. It's great to be back. You are all wonderful, and I am exhausted from my lil poetry binge... Dream sweet...and, thank you.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha love this... so glad you are back |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you are starlit in the praise of my pen, again returning to offer your enthrall and i am all lit up by the miraculous touch of your phrase... amazed again by mirrors ....... hey KAREN!! might be passing by nawlins on daway to chattanooga...... call soon... we'll chat *wink |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And no one's happier to see ya! Go ahead...love us to death. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhhhh Serenity, I'm sooooooooooo happy you came back cuz just last nite I was hanging out in the library 4a bit and saw your name there quite a few times I admit and thought2myself I miss her here... And so when I signed outta here I took a quick peak at front page posts and saw your name in a post of new and hence2day I knew I'd find you... Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh on cheekz I mizz u... And oohh b4 I 4get well ya know this poem the reason2which I reply here, well me thinx itz reallly great! *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and sexy...James |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Mmm....I've missed your words! Great to have you back sweet poetess  Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity A lovely romp through the willows, enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome back.... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this is great.....makes me wish for inspiration to my muse....who by the way *in case she is listening* has been silent...far too long.....sigh good to see you back |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
did you ever really leave?? wonderful. . . you've been missed. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Humble thanks to all my pet poets!!!! You all make the computer bill absolutely irrevelant!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's good to see your name again, sweet poetess. And I like this "sweet sustain of liquid fire shameless hips slaves of desire..." It sizzles! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
i've missed you |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
serenity, And such a fine return! I love this piece. Way cool!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Just soooooooo lovely~ 'transforming urgency to still-- quicksilver mercury in spill and back again...' Me lika lots~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This is a good piece of bliss done right. The mercury was hot on this. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
k...welcome home...it's about time and you still shine...h |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Amazed....can't think of a better word to describe my feelings when I read this one. A true work of art! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am very touched by the response to this. I am humbled, and I thank you.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Not so humble *BUMP* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Larry? There's nothing I love better than a not-so-humble BUMP!!!! Yer a doll, me sweets!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow... (yes, I'm finally working my way through the library) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how they do that and get away with it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very sensual.....Yes, I would say you are back again....most definitely... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
GRINNING...don't think me ungrateful...but I am beginning to think I should have named this one, "Poltergeist!" GAWD I LOVE THIS PLACE!!! |
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