Open Poetry #20 |
Burst of Storm |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Burst of Storm look at us! a connection burst, reconnecting now, in this life sparking delight fingertips sparkling a mystery of light touch me now! for no caress will do no! we meet with cymballic nature in symbolic fervor with symbols that tremble thunder rumbles flashing crashes and in the aftermath in the aftermath God will grant us breath… breathe for me please, exhale let me know you live, and let me know you forgive the fact that we have waited so long to reconnect…. in circumspect should we wait or crash again bring the air up tight and let it spin tornado a moment or hurricane a sigh or let it go by and bye comfort comes in the aftermath it lends its way down long green path ah, but see the sight white of light within dark of bright clouds make night within the day electric confluence holds the sway know that I am within your charm but I am grounded within your arms afterwhich the ozone lays new and bright and comes in haze of nebulous feel a miraculous real and look at us we are an appeal... ~*~ Repost 2/2001 revised 4/2002 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
should we wait or crash again bring the air up tight and let it spin tornado a moment or hurricane a sigh or let it go by and bye I really liked this. Could feel the current in the air! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is a storm of emotions that shines from your golden quill! (sigh) I love lightning and the forces of nature it always sparks off, sweet friend, this scintillates with power, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
thunder rumbles flashing crashes and in the aftermath in the aftermath God will grant us breath… breathe for me please, exhale let me know you live, and let me know you forgive the fact that we have waited so long to reconnect…. in circumspect ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WOW!! Hang on Toto! Felt like I was in a whirlwind for a moment there..... and it was wonderful! Karilea this has such a special feel to it...lifting up and then crashing down again to...breathe. I love it! Hugs. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ I love a good storm, this is a stunning vision...very nice my friend... Lauren~ Step through the |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I really like this. We forget that a healthy connection isn't always gentle...sometimes it is passionate and even electric. I saw lightning here! ThisDiamond |
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