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craigrk
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0 posted 2002-04-13 09:12 AM




   Libra – ’74

Your voice
perhaps the only one I hear,
yes, the one I know I hear.
Your touch never foreign,
like my own only real.Your love,
though you can’t abstract it
races frantic symmetry,
circles in tireless haste,
sheepdogs the shattering
bits of my world
from drifting into lost -
as the trees once ruled the earth
you are my only profession.

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-04-13 11:39 AM


quite a narrative, much enjoyed


ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-04-13 06:51 PM


Hello.
The pulse of this work made my heart beat faster. Wonderful expression! ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-04-13 09:36 PM




(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, such wonderful passion and romance fills these tender words! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always so inspiring, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-13 09:41 PM



"...races frantic symmetry,
circles in tireless haste,
sheepdogs the shattering
bits of my world..."

what a picture....thanks for the snapshot....makes me want to see the whole album...

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