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Singing To Your Mouth
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Singing To Your Mouth |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for my sweet Joanna...I will be going on vacation tomorrow but I will be back next week!  I love you Joanna and blow kisses to you until then! Singing To Your Mouth By: Noah Eaton 6/7/02 Open your sweet mouth, my love And let me speak secrets to your sexy lips I'll sing into your mouth and find the end of that tunnel Where I find all my dreams running to find your reflecting kiss Help me out here, my verses are missing adjectives Now your tender caresses have brought interjections to spell loves laughter I am carrying baskets in your meadow to gather flowers like a child Collecting sweet memories we will always keep in rapture Lay down, my love, as I'll kiss your luscious neck sweetly I'll craft you a necklace of smooches you can wear like beads so lovable I;ll kiss you until I circle your neck and tie the lace together So when you feel lonely you'll always have my love that feels so paroxysmal This summer, I dream of singing to your mouth Until then, my sweet Joanna, I blow millions of kisses your way Deep in my dreams I will always kiss you And wake up to the sweet eyelash kiss of your emerlad eyes every day... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-07-2002 11:48 PM).] |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
How sweet of you. What a lovely poem! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Me likes this poem! U sure do have a big vocabulary  I just love an intellectual like you hunnie. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Noah This beautifully romantic as you can write so well. I hope you share these words...... "Lay down, my love, as I'll kiss your luscious neck sweetly I'll craft you a necklace of smooches you can wear like beads so lovable I;ll kiss you until I circle your neck and tie the lace together So when you feel lonely you'll always have my love that feels so paroxysmal This summer, I dream of singing to your mouth Until then, my sweet Joanna, I blow millions of kisses your way Deep in my dreams I will always kiss you And wake up to the sweet eyelash kiss of your emerlad eyes every day..." I think this is wonderful until I reach the word "paroxysmal" because if it was me, I have a hard time visualizing myself ending those tender lines with that word. Believe me I'm not really finding fault...just wondering.....when you say it it might sound just right! Have a nice day Noah! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, I believe Joanna will love this. Have a wonderful vacation. We'll miss you. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ Lovely....just lovely...be well, and return to us safely....hugssss.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lovely and romantic, Noah... I hope you have a wonderful vacation and come back to us safe and happy.  ~ vacation hugsLyra |
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