Open Poetry #20 |
Balanced Book? |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
in memory of J.J. Rousseau Balance your book when born free, your rights are there the natural ones, but geography divides equality hides, debits fly owners stake rights strongmen stage fights like in lands of liberty in which you live when you don't give. take stock of their lot, when slaves are bought freedom they quest... How backward progress really is a simple removal of the veil? a repeat of an age old tale.. where and when can equality be Age of Reason eyed liberty should unfold in you and me [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-08-2002 09:34 PM).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always I love the strength of your poetry. Great write! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good to get a note from Holland, one of the countries whose people I admire most |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is pithy, like most of your poems, it says a lot of serious things. Nan |
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