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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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This is my answer to MidsummerRain's "Guide me to an Ocean" challenge Show me love Hold me as I walk I am afraid to lose my way And never find my way out Bring me a rose Tell me you love me Release me from my doubts With just one word Walk me home Keep me company at night Tears come easy to lonely eyes Walking alone in the rain Talk to me Listen to what I have to say Or sadness will guide me to an ocean Lapping waves drown my screams _,,,^.^,,,_ Florence [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (06-07-2002 10:16 AM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
MC, this is exquisite! "Bring me a rose Tell me you love me Release me from my doubts With just one word" I can't even express to you how much I love this poem. It says so much to me. I am putting it in my personal library if you dont mind  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hope that he is listening. Well done, mon cherie. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mon Cherie, a melancholy plea, here...sincere and sweet! I enjoyed your take on this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Talk to me Listen to what I have to say Or sadness will guide me to an ocean Lapping waves drown my screams..." What talent Mon Cherie! Its like music to my ears! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done, just the walk in the rain say LONELY to me in buckets! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thank you for reading it, everyone!  The forum is closed, but whatever... I'm going to thank you anywayz.And yup... Magnus is rrrrright!! It screams LONELY!!!!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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