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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Passions silent passing never noticed till it's gone red wine stained , forgotten hours, memories lost when I belonged. While the tedium of conflict like a snake bite to the brow spreads its grotesque poison throughout my life somehow. Unspoken words collect themselves in walls of deep debris abscounding all thats meaningful, controlling what I see. Routine becomes my purpose, banality, my cure. Sleep prescribes the seditive for what I must endure. Phantoms lie beyond my sight in solid disarray emasculate my energy not caring what they say Sending Jackyls, in disguises knawing bone and tearing flesh for them no absolution when the meat they smell is fresh The world is full of midnight predation rules the streets cachophony tears the morbid air with jeers of whores and cheats And when in time, this insolance, has eaten its full share May eternal constipation leave them writhing in despair. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Two powerful writes this morning Bags! You should never eat a big meal just before bedtime,....... " Sending Jackyls, in disguises knawing bone and tearing flesh for them no absolution when the meat they smell is fresh The world is full of midnight predation rules the streets cachophony tears the morbid air with jeers of whores and cheats And when in time, this insolance, has eaten its full share May eternal constipation leave them writhing in despair." This will happen sometimes....Seriously....superb writing! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are posting some outstanding poetry... I feel you may be having a little difficulty with maybe having put the same poem under two titles... You can ask one of the moderators to delete the dupe... Also, there is an edit link at the top of each poem we post, where we can go into the poem and change the title and the text if we desire to... Sunshine will help you fix any probs you may have... I am really enjoying your poetry...thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello bags... which poem would you like to leave up? Let me know, and I will take care of it for you. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks Magnus, that is indeed what I did. I sent Sunshine an e-mail to delete one. Regards, bags123 |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Hi ethome, Yeah, those midnight snacks can be devestating to the old digestive track. Glad you liked the poem. Peace |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderfully captivating write, sweet friend, there is indeed much cacophony and haunting mnaterial in our world today, but yet there can always be a passion unlike any other that can pierce the smoke and bring light forth again! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, use the Edit Button which would be the third button to your right on the post options bar and you can edit if you wish, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Outstanding!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The world is full of midnight predation rules the streets Excellent writing, Bags...  ~ many hugsLyra |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks for the comments. This was written during a very hard time in my life (thankfully over) when I was in the midst of a legal battle with my ex-wife. Very Un-Fun! |
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