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sweetonu New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 9 |
There is not enough room in your heart, so you file them together--suffocated and speechless in journals you name after dead people. Your father tells you that even duct-tape secures petty things, like booboos, and holes in your knees. I want to say these are not small blue grievings. That they are sky large rains and too wet to be stable. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love the use of your words in this poem.. enjoyed it, and an excellent ending... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Not to mimic Barry in any way ... but what he said!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exactly what Barry and Craig said...LOL. Excellent wording here...loved it. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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sweetonu New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 9 |
Thank you for that, all of you 2 funny..glad you thought this ok. sweetonu |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Nancy, et al, said I truly enjoyed this piece. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This strikes a chord. Not sure in whether that's in a good way or bad. Regardless, but I like it. ~R. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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