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TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-04-12 11:32 PM

today i saw what you really were
today i saw youre teardrops and i heard you cry,
My life was nothing but a blur,only you came into focus,
I then learnt, what other people said was just a lie.

I saw you become what i thought you where not,
you went from a rose to a weed, in a matter of seconds.
my world crumbled,
was everything i believed just a guest in this mascerade?
Today i saw who you were.

you were my love, I would die for you
you were my everything, my heart was youres
Until I saw youre colors.

I saw you become who you really were
you came out of youre cacoon, and actually spoke freely,
Without youre shackles of youre shy conscience.

Today i saw youre teardrops and i heard you cry,
Because of me you then wept,
I was an angel and told you who you were,
before these demons could explain and break youre heart.

now youre tears consume you,
those tears can now heal you,
next time you break free, May youre colors be bright
not dim.

The man of few words...

[This message has been edited by TriXter (04-13-2002 02:39 AM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-04-12 11:42 PM

TriXter~

Sadly written, Peace to you...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-04-13 12:01 PM

Sad, yet the ending had a positive note.

Maybe fix the typos? It should be were,not where.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-13-2002 12:03 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-13 12:04 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so sad yet also shimmers with hope, sweet friend, I too pray with all my heart very soon these tears become one sof warmth and joy and from the tears new strength and love will be uncovered! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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