Open Poetry #20 |
Let Me Out Of Here |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
cold Its amazing how I can smile when eyes pass me in appreciation following me until I'm out of sight while they wait on mine to turn around. I can be numb to all attention or my vulnerability could be in plain sight. Its just that I'm being careful these days because all eyes seem to add up to love's hold. I never could endure the math. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm sorry you are feeling so vulnerable these days. I like the ending, about not being able to do the math. Well done, Temptress. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always found that there's only one equation that matters. . . have I mentioned that it's good to see your work here again??? -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
From out of the depths of the hurting heart comes the pain of reality and the indications are so intense...........Like a whitewash of the mind the thoughts become like those seeking baby's milk before maturity to solid foods again! Good write! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Temptress darling girl this is a powerful emotive piece of writing, truly outstanding. The beauty and divinity the wondrous depth of heart’s vulnerability you show it so well. Your writing shines darling heart it really does. Do I love this? Tell me what do you think? I love it utterly utterly this is exquisite writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Jenn, I'm so sorry to hear this, sweet friend, it is indeed so very hard to trust someone or understand someone from deep down nowadays, I know, but I also know you are destined to find true happiness for you are a very strong-hearted and loving person and I know you will find what you desire! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Vulnerability shines like a beacon....it radiates from the inner being. It's smart to be careful during that time....... |
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