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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-06-06 09:55 AM

Knock on my morning
cover me in welcome
take my hand, draw me out
play with me in days of some

show me the slipcover
of dew over grass
shower me in gray rain
till sun peaks past

give me the good, then
bad of the day,
save my smiles to
light our way

heather me in purple’s
golden haze
while we bend like trees
within our sway

lay down your picnic
to blanket our desire
then cuddle close
in tamping fires

knock on my morning
welcome our day
I’ll take your hand
for your night to stay

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-06-06 10:03 AM

Soliel Noir darling girl oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine poet. I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, your words are divine always. The feelings reach from within the page, you have written this sooooooo very well

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-06-06 10:21 AM

A picnic on a day like today would be a wonderful thing....

very nicely done my friend...

LRbaba
Junior Member

since 2002-05-07

Posts 30
Dallas, Texas,

3 posted 2002-06-06 10:29 AM

Champaigne and Strawberries

nice picture soleil

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-06-06 10:29 AM

Soleil Noir
A lovely invitation, enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-06-06 11:20 AM

Oh, what a treat this is....to start one's
day...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-06-06 11:43 AM

ms noir,
this is lovely
the fragile seduction
and the waiting warm to spend
very romantic ms

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-06-06 12:18 PM

Oooh Soleil!!! This has to be your best yet!
Of course I feel that way about each one...
but this....this is very special.

Love this!
~Hugs~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-06-06 01:13 PM

I offer my hand
you draw me down to picnic
we share what life gives

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2002-06-06 01:52 PM

Superb, as always.

enjoyed,
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-06-06 09:20 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, may your love always bade you welcome happily each day and kiss you goodnight and share every sunrise and sunset with you forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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