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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-06 06:55 AM

Whirl

I wish
I had
been there
with you
in the cool
light sunned
June day
waving
in nothing more
than it
and a blanket
out of sight
secret place
smoldering

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

1 posted 2002-06-06 10:00 AM

Warm, nice,
very nice...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-06-06 10:05 AM

Helen darling girl this is wonderful, it’s true only you could have written this, it’s utterly utterly perfect I love the warmth this provoked.

There are so many excellent lines in this that to choose my favourite would be impossible, it is totally perfectly. Well done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-06-06 12:51 PM

mmmm yes
blanket?
lovely seduction ms slick

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-06-06 01:02 PM

I would grant your wish
while feeling passion's warm rise
love takes center stage

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

5 posted 2002-06-06 02:26 PM

A warm sigh,
sitting in the shade.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-06-06 03:26 PM

1slick_lady
In June, don't think I'd need the blanket.
Enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-06-06 09:17 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, may you always share such lovely beautiful days like this with the one you love always! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

sweetonu
New Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 9

8 posted 2002-06-06 09:58 PM

I would take that blanket
and throw it to the lake

this is awesome!

sweetonu

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2002-06-07 01:07 PM

a nic-pic, fun ......
great write.....

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-06-07 04:19 PM

spinning around??

love it helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-06-07 07:29 PM

Helen,
That must not be an Arizona wish.

Roasted what? And cool picture...

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