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rwood
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0 posted 2002-06-05 10:23 PM




You make
the she of me
feel special
when you speak
deep voiced want

and drink me
into you wine

To be yours
is simply
to smile
from ends of places

to glow
from inside
a storm of feelings

to bring forth
liquid in a desert
of never touched

to grow wild
within a field
of pampered orchids

to see behind
the sun
and fit secrets

to stretch yawn
morning
readily unmade

to make daze
dreaming horizons
infinite curves

she
and I
have so much
in common

© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-06-05 10:36 PM


Indeed you do dear somy~   "She" is truly wonderful, as is this excellent piece from your pen of grace.  Hugs lady.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-05 10:37 PM


Oh Reg...this could be taken in a couple of
different directions....but I sense that was
your intent anyway....

Nicely done...very pondering write..

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3 posted 2002-06-05 10:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, may the she in you forever smile and may love sspirit always make the child in you smile with beauty! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-05 10:59 PM


The receipient of this poem will be my hero forever!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-06-05 11:07 PM


Amazing write Regina....just amazing!
~Hugs~

Suetang
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6 posted 2002-06-05 11:48 PM


Hello Regina

Beautiful words from an equally beautiful soul.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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The One
7 posted 2002-06-05 11:53 PM


i LOVED this poem, filled with beautiful words and loving thought

The man of few words...

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-06-06 05:18 AM


reg, the she of you
the two of you
lovely here
enjoyed by the we of me

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2002-06-06 06:41 AM



Now why do I envision warm
orange marmalade coming from this
beauty?

ethome
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10 posted 2002-06-06 06:43 AM


Very nice work........I appreciate the way of the soul in this!
Sven
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11 posted 2002-06-06 04:35 PM


she is you. . . yes. . . you understand that. . .good. . .

let her keep speaking. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-06-07 11:34 AM


"She" is GR8, but we already knew that, didn't we

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-06-07 11:40 AM


Regina,
Balladeer beat me to the barn door. But Randy sais he has his eye on you.

bags123
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14 posted 2002-06-07 11:41 AM


Lovely piece. Lovely Love.
Larry C
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15 posted 2002-06-07 12:51 PM


Reg,
How do you do that? Love to be envied for sure! Wow...

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2002-06-07 02:20 PM


Very nice...James
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17 posted 2002-06-07 03:01 PM


love the way you write...you seem to describe what every woman hopes and dreams about...(from what I read)you are lucky, both in life and in the gift and exploration of your muse  
we are lucky you choose to share here  

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (06-07-2002 03:01 PM).]

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