Open Poetry #20 |
Beyond The Realm Of Life |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beyond The Realm Of Life . . Some things, though interwoven with my soul, can never see the light of day, be mentioned openly, spoken of at all. I love, from the time of conception, throughout my life, with no end in sight, all within the realm of my world, but some things, though tightly enmeshed in the very fiber of my being, will never be known. I love you with a passion beyond the depth of thought, hold you to my soul with life itself, yearn to dance to the drum of my heart around and thoughtout the whole of you. I long for just your touch, your face before my eyes; I wish upon every star, every breath of wind that's ever touched your skin… but there are some things, that I can never share with the rest of my loves, and for that I die a little, each day. ©may 2002 wesley james beard, jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (06-05-2002 09:31 PM).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I always think a good poem is one that you can really relate to - This poem did that perfectly for me; 'I know how that feels' I said to myself ... Lovely poem, meaningful, well written and nice to read ... Just remember if you burry something too deep; it will only decay and come back uglier than when it was first burried . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
love's longing always wants a voice, j-- and? I share these thoughts, and the frustration of necessary silence...sigh, you are such a dear voice of my soul--thank you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What we are unable to share has a way of killing us softly, keeping our pain and our joy cloaked within ourselves. Thank you for these thoughts of yours. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To read your work is an emotional recharge. Hope you know how wonderful a gift you share with all of us. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I love you with a passion beyond the depth of thought, hold you to my soul with life itself, yearn to dance to the drum of my heart around and thoughtout the whole of you" (big hugggsssssss) Oh Jimmy, this is soooooo beautiful but filled with a tinge of deep sadness, sweet friend, hide what you must but always be sure you share the things that your love must be able to feel for otherwise it will hurt you in the long run and you don't deserve to be hurt like that! (sigh) This is soooooo emotionally packed, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jimmy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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