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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-06-05 12:02 PM



Cold night condensing
Moisture from thin air
Breathed by you
And I as we shared
Lip touched thoughts
Nuzzled with neck nipped laughs
Left morning’s petals dripping dew
That in slanting rays of rising
Reflected bare images
Distorting the hush
Of  lip traced silence
With a myopic vision
Of what it means to be here

“Love Me?”

New light burning clouds low slung
Soon dries slick leafed gardens
That hands and senses found delightful
But muse found encased in essence of image
Imagined
I managed control
Waiting for the answer
And spring beds to bloom.

“You hear the thunder last night?”

It echoed…

© Copyright 2002 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-06-05 12:16 PM


Ron

I have sat and waited to see the opening of a flower...wanting to capture something...I grew impatient..and the flower opened any way.  Enjoy your writing, as always.  Good to see you!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-06-05 12:38 PM



Hey...the drought has lifted...
thank God...
you're home!

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3 posted 2002-06-05 12:41 PM


CPatHair~

This ....

'lip traced silence'

.... is so lovely a thought~

Nice to see you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-06-05 12:47 PM


Cpat Hair
An adventure is an adventure, enjoyed.

jwesley
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5 posted 2002-06-05 01:00 PM


Hey, good write my friend.


jwesley

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6 posted 2002-06-05 01:48 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Ron, I too have always wanted to watch a flower bloom before my eyes, this is such a wonderful poem! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-06-05 03:58 PM


Immaculate

ethome
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8 posted 2002-06-05 04:03 PM


Exceptional write!
Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-06-05 06:28 PM


I'm so happy you're back!!
Excellent write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana
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10 posted 2002-06-05 06:32 PM


enjoy your rerad
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-06-05 06:48 PM


Enjoyed...James
Tiersdin
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12 posted 2002-06-05 08:51 PM


Beautiful...


~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Nan
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13 posted 2002-06-05 09:54 PM


This poem just makes ya want to do some nuzzlin'... A good one, Cap'n...
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14 posted 2002-06-06 03:02 PM


Ron....You are overdue.....as am I for a haulout. Nicely done. Keep your eye on the weather.   Bob
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15 posted 2002-06-07 03:50 PM


Enjoyed this very much. Excellent writing.

Deb

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16 posted 2002-06-07 04:56 PM


yes. . . it's good to read such fine work again. . .

well done. . .

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