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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-06-05 11:41 AM



my Unipak creature
a cat so feline
he couldn’t be sweeter
unless twere alive

he’s soft and he’s plush
all squishy and nice
and each time I hug him
it has to be twice

I know I’m too old
for a stuffed little cat
but he’s cuddly and round
in his poly-filled fat

another good reason
he’s so special to me
he came from my daughter
for my birthday glee

he’s a hard, cold pink nose
and whiskers all stiff
he’s the sweetest of presents
a right charming gift

a coat that’s orange striped
with paws and a tail
tipped in white fluffy cuddles
much sweeter than ale

his tummy’s all white
and the space ‘round his nose,
his eyes are sea blue
‘bout the candle-light glows

when I snuggle him to me
he buries his face
in the heart of my torso
my love-kindling place

he has not a name
not a real one you see
but he’s special, so special,
truly special to me


©June 5, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-06-05 11:56 AM


"when I snuggle him to me
he buries his face
in the heart of my torso
my love-kindling place"
Love that line! Everyone/everthing should be so well snuggled.


Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2002-06-05 11:59 AM



Those are the precious ones, the gifts from ones children.

You just cuddle along dear

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2002-06-05 01:14 PM


Yep...definitely something to be said for snuggling, no matter what age one may be...
but you're right in this...loved it.


jwesley

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