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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-05 10:40 AM


Light above, of glowing shine

          tender mercies, hear my plea

Wilt thee know, thy be mine

          tender mercies, hear my plea

Can thy heart, feel of me

          fall to ground on bended knee

Doth thy know, thee will be

          fall to ground on bended knee

Light of love, of soft night

          swiftest love, my own delight

Cans’t thee know of this knight

          swiftest love, my own delight

‘Pon the break of the morn

          harbor me within your soul

Thy love of thee whence born

          harbor me within your soul

Heart of hearts, eye of eyes

          tender mercies, hear my plea

Soul of soul, trembling sighs

          tender mercies, hear my plea

Words of soft, singing voice

          fall to ground on bended knee

Song of hearts, lover’s choice

          fall to ground on bended knee

Left to live,  left to hold
Lost to touch,  felt once bold


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1 posted 2002-06-05 10:45 AM


Magnus,
I like your experimenting, enjoyed the read.

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-05 10:47 AM


Thanx Sy,  I did have a little bit of help,
which I am very grateful for.

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3 posted 2002-06-05 10:50 AM



Magnus, this is a beautiful blending of two poets, come as one voice... a very lovely presentation...

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4 posted 2002-06-05 12:31 PM


Magnus, I really love this! The flow of the poem is so nice. And the whole thing is so romantic! I'm gonna add it to my library.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2002-06-05 12:38 PM


Magnus~
Soft and lovely expression~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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