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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-05 07:12 AM

Shining gold in rise
Rocking night gently to sleep
Lullaby of stars

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2002-06-05 07:48 AM

treasures of delight
what beautiful images
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-05 01:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I have never seen you write senryus before, this is sooooooo beautiful! (big hugggsssss) Every time I go camping in the summer out on Rocky Mountain National Park or in the desert, I am blessed to see the stars so bright and their beauty gets me to sleep easily! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-06-05 04:27 PM

singing softly now
tales of lover's first seeing
music evermore

well, it looks like I've been inspired. . . well done Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-06-05 06:09 PM

hymn of starry night
elevates high atmosphere
rocks with pretty dreams

think you inspired me too here.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-06-05 06:16 PM

light of stars is bright
poem watches in the night
let's us see again

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-06-05 06:24 PM

enjoy

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-06-05 07:50 PM

Very well done, Magnus....

jwesley

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-06-05 07:54 PM

Magnus darling heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. The poem is stunning. The beauty of your writing is your command of brevity but lately you are really writing with starlight. Utterly utterly perfect, as are you darling heart.

Exceptional writing, you simply get better and better, do I love it, Mmmmm YOU know I adore it. Well done again darling heart utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-06-05 07:54 PM

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2002-06-06 04:34 PM

How peaceful and restful.......I've been there!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2002-06-07 03:45 PM

Nice work, and such beautiful imagery as well.

Deb

bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

12 posted 2002-06-07 03:54 PM

I confess I'm not much into Japenese poetic forms, but I liked the intent, and the message.

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