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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-06-05 12:49 PM

I cut my face on her smile.
She cut her hair in the sun.
We danced in dead red threads
until we stopped and were done.

I cut my face on her mirror.
She cut her hands on a book.
We read from many black pages
until we forgot how to look.

I cut my face on her kisses.
She cut her quick with a file.
We fell upon each other slowly.
We fell and glued together the miles.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-06-05 01:13 AM

Hey squirrel. Read this, still trying to figure it out. Lotta great lines.

I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto

Lifehouse

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-06-05 01:22 AM

Love hurts don't it? Bunch of damn paper cuts that never heal! I shouldn't say that...but somedays I can't seem to stop the bleeding no matter what I do.

I have quoted this song before but I tell you it is my theme song...ready?

"And I won't read that book again because the ending's just too hard to take, so for now lets be real. I never thought I could feel this way but I've got to say that I just don't get it" if I ever will.

Nice writing~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-06-05 02:50 AM

Um, I take it, you had a nice vacation?

grinning widely now...

this, my friend? Is Sand Sculpture!

totally enthralling, and I love the bits of hints of hurt in the love--not that I love ropeburn--grin again--but I do love honesty. And sometimes? that hurts. (exquisitely?

)

welcome home, mike.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-06-05 03:45 AM

We want to know every detail!!! (You may continue in Adult if you need to)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-06-05 04:21 AM

So, you two glued together all those loose ends? All's well that mends well?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-06-05 04:38 AM

Squirrel
Missed ya and your interesting approach. This is precious. Love after all the ups and downs and still glued together is the essence of true love....great work!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-06-05 05:10 AM

have I ever felt like that!!! what a way to put it into words!! I'm impressed, yes!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-06-05 08:56 PM

Thanks, everyone. I'm kinda burned out at the moment, so that's why my presence is a trickle.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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