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Then we can sleep |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I cut my face on her smile. She cut her hair in the sun. We danced in dead red threads until we stopped and were done. I cut my face on her mirror. She cut her hands on a book. We read from many black pages until we forgot how to look. I cut my face on her kisses. She cut her quick with a file. We fell upon each other slowly. We fell and glued together the miles. She said burn ... together. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey squirrel. Read this, still trying to figure it out. Lotta great lines. I'm falling even more in love with you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love hurts don't it? Bunch of damn paper cuts that never heal! I shouldn't say that...but somedays I can't seem to stop the bleeding no matter what I do. I have quoted this song before but I tell you it is my theme song...ready? "And I won't read that book again because the ending's just too hard to take, so for now lets be real. I never thought I could feel this way but I've got to say that I just don't get it" if I ever will.  Nice writing~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Um, I take it, you had a nice vacation? grinning widely now... this, my friend? Is Sand Sculpture! totally enthralling, and I love the bits of hints of hurt in the love--not that I love ropeburn--grin again--but I do love honesty. And sometimes? that hurts. (exquisitely?  )welcome home, mike. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We want to know every detail!!! (You may continue in Adult if you need to)  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So, you two glued together all those loose ends? All's well that mends well? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Squirrel Missed ya and your interesting approach. This is precious. Love after all the ups and downs and still glued together is the essence of true love....great work! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
have I ever felt like that!!! what a way to put it into words!! I'm impressed, yes! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, everyone. I'm kinda burned out at the moment, so that's why my presence is a trickle.She said burn ... together. |
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