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The Gloaming
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The Gloaming |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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It’s in the quiet hours just before waking The thoughts of the day collect And how I love to spend them Planning the things not yet I try to awake before sunrise Has broken over the sky And spend those few moments reflecting What the day brings and why I’ve heard of it called as the gloaming Yet a name I have never put on This moment I spend not yet dreaming Yet dreaming is still carried on How I wish I could hold on to this moment And carry it throughout the day When possibilities are endless And time has not yet passed away Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Michelle, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we ahave all missed you and your gorgeous words so so much, this is beautfiul! (smiles) Anything is possible as long as you believe in yourself, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ULookSoPrecious Junior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 16NC, U.S.A. |
This is great. I too, love those quiet, peaceful moments in the morning. Take Care, Kris "Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is very beautiful, Michelle....I can just picture how peaceful it must look... I haven't done mornings in a long time, but this reminds me of the feeling I get just before sunset. I posted a poem here, a while back called shadows...its about that hour just before sunset...I can't remember which forum its in...I think 19 or possibly 18. Thanks for sharing this beauty with us.  ~ hugsLyra |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this. I like the gloaming. |
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