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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Your fingers slid Cool trickling skin underneath remembered fragrances waft of erotic sensabilities While pouting lips waited A parting invitation of probing question “will I?” No will involves such tender slide Into depths warmth Comfort filling each move From where I was To where I wish It’s raining…. Hidden behind panes transparent We are soaking wet “Yes, I would” |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hey, Ron. I have missed you good buddy  Durn, you are SO good, you rascal! [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-04-2002 02:38 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
No will involves such tender slide Into depths warmth Comfort filling each move From where I was To where I wish Was just having a daydream much like this. Nice to see ya, Ron. I'm falling even more in love with you Letting go of all I've held onto Lifehouse [This message has been edited by Duncan (06-04-2002 04:20 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew Ron your running hot! in this one.....Great metaphors!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're back... good... actually... better! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your fingers slid Cool trickling skin underneath remembered fragrances waft of erotic sensabilities While pouting lips waited A parting invitation of probing question ======================================== Will they? Well who wouldnt?  Hey you...look whos back and steaming the screens We love a poet who knows how to make and entrance. LOL When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How good to see you again. This is very good,so emotive. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Ron, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) Such soft sensuality fills your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow..........wonderful.....didn't know you had been gone.....I have been gone for a bit too...lol wish I could make a splash entrance as this does *smile* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Ron...my friend...when you make it rain, it pours..or something..Loved this! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very very nice...love the imagery, love the feeling... was wondering though - why do you initial capitalise every line? Is that a throw back from rhyming days? Curious..  K |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
No will involves such tender slide Into depths warmth Comfort filling each move From where I was To where I wish The thoughts your words evoke reach a quiet place in the back of my mind. Truly they are poetry in motion at it's very best! |
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