Open Poetry #20 |
I Walk the Path |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I Walk the path of a foggy distant memory tripping over stones and the gems of whom we were back then the rustling of satin sheets upon the sighs of night back when there was a wiggle in my walk when a turtle neck was too tight and our budget was too low our bed was a double and a dishwasher, not affordable those distant memories is when we were the closest a vacation two hours away back the same day and the benches of our daughters little league held the tears of the losers and our hearts beat like our sons favorite cartoon Speed Racer to the tune of midnight love and the kitten clawing at the door as i did down the back of another day in paradise
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice memories...and nicely shared... hope you find some of those feelings grace your life always.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I too remember how we started out, and see where we are now. This is a good piece. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
some 70's stuff I think from what I have read since I was so young at the time (he he) great little look backs Vicky T |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may these sweet memories forever shine in your heart and embrace you like those turtle-necks and play re-runs and all-new episodes like Speed Racer! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you ron..yep the good ole days they were..hugs passing shadows..thank you for peeking in..happy you can relate.. hugss DS..hey you are still young..white hair or not ha noah..thank you hon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Victoria, I have some of these same memories.... Wonderful write...wonderful memories. ~Hugs~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Too bad the look back always seems better than the present. Good write, though. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you nancy..yep lots of sweet memories and yes im sure you have many too..hugss thanks for peeking in sandra..thank you..why does that little grumpy face you left me make me laugh..i guess cause its so cute.. hugss |
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