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Common Ground |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In silence I sit, my voice overcome my echo in vain, as I touch there, where last I felt yours. A gentle warmth flows the moment, a watershed of thoughts, as I feel blessed for your know. I could mellow in your arms, if only. I would age in reverse, as your youthfulness produces an energy that speaks to me, its power pulling me out of my darkness. A common ground exists. I walk it daily among my gardens of poppies, lilacs, the softness of candytuft everywhere, roses rising amongst the mounds. It is there my eyes can rest, feeling the beauty, breathing the sweetness, envisioning the words that touch my soul. That feeling follows me throughout, sets me free, reigns my heart, swallows my beyond until that touch becomes yours once more. M  "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-03-2002 07:49 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen So very stunning were your images and words, the two complimented each other perfectly. Your words have a habit of sweeping me off my feet. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. You really really are very good at this. But, of course...you already have been told that at least a whole bunch of times...eh? A tender, yearning and loving poem... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, that is a wonderful compliment to me and I so appreciate it... Thank You hugsssss M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Barry, thank you for saying that...I just write from my heart and have had to learn to control that a bit, as some days I can have feelings that overwhelm in reverse..but I am learning *s thank you again M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Maureen, this is absolutely wonderful! I love it  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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