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Love of Thine Heart
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Love of Thine Heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Love of this heart, art thee above Art thee alone at window high Soul of mine heart, wilt thee know love Love of mine all, wilt words reply Can thy bridle of soul be free and spur the ride of treasured steed as song of passion ‘fore the kiss whispers thine ears mine every need Winds thaw from in my chill of dark as words of love echo the morn For thee doth wish mine love’s caress Whence from most fragile tatters torn A touch of rose on flawless silk as hues of dawn now close the night Of thee mine wish one touch of face Whence thee arise ‘pon moon of light As love does take the morn to hide where lips will clash and time erase A sigh shall let thy calls protest till slumber brings to smile thy face. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely wonderful Barry!! *SIGH* Loved this one! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Yet another beautiful picture you have painted from your talented palette of words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, something told me that you might get some pleasure from this poem.... I just can't figure out why though??? Sue T. thanx dear friend, always enjoy your kindness... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy and now you are holder of the moons light, oh my stars what can I say, except this is gorgeous and so well written. You know darling heart that lately your writing has truly grown to be incredible. You have talent, well you’ve always had that, but something else darling heart, you have something else. You are reaching deeper an up until now untapped streams of talent. This is as always from you an absolutely brilliant piece of writing and I love it utterly utterly love it. You knew I’d say that didn’t you? Of course I know I’m so predictable. I can’t help it I have a marked predilection for your writing. You guessed I know, I can never hide anything me   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, darling girl... Wilt thee once not yee say thy words of tender sway Wilt thy pen's ink not flow Nay Wench, till I say so! You know I always love your ever flowing well of words on these pages blue... Thanx Mushy... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Incredibibly romantic and full of star's glitter and blushes of roses. Written in a classical style which so captivates and intrigues the heart of this reader. ***Ivy Rose |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have turned into a real romantic, Barry...it looks good on you  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wear the Romance Cloak very well... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
sigh... you writings are beautiful and shakespearean esque... its is divine |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
You are so very consistent in your writings, and these please me so very much... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shimmer with sighs that light these pages and have us all daydreaming! (sigh) This is another true keeper, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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