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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-06-03 02:54 AM


I've nothing to offer
to this already over crowded
out dated system tottering
on the edge of yesterday's
festering malignancy
nothing more to add
when everything under
the sun has been beaten
like the proverbial
"dead horse"
I can only watch~
a silent witness &
sharer in the pain created
on mass scale by man
for man...
If only someone could
quiet the deafening noise
perhaps I could sleep,
just a little before
the end...

~R.T.
6/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
1 posted 2002-06-03 04:31 AM


"all the good themes have been used up and turned into theme parks.
so i don't find it especially cheerful to be living in the middle of a decade with nothing to look forward to and no one to look up to."

ya just reminded me of that quote...
great thoughts you've brought up here.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-06-03 05:11 AM


Thank you, sir...

and a belated "Welcome" to Passions...

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

RMW
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3 posted 2002-06-03 12:39 PM


Tier...nice flow. Robert.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-06-03 01:21 PM


Shhhhhh.  I loved it!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-03-2002 01:22 PM).]

Tiersdin
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east coast
5 posted 2002-06-03 03:48 PM


Thank you Robert and Interloper!

*smiles*

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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6 posted 2002-06-03 04:12 PM


to sleep. . . perchance. . . but, do dreams come at the end??

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2002-06-03 07:18 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Tiersdin, this is so very striking, sweet friend, it too saddens me when I watch the world like I am standing ona widows walk above it all and observing and wishing if only love can save us all suddenly! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, I join you in your sympathetic thoughts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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