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Blush Of A Rose
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Blush Of A Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A wish on shimmer’s glowing star among the heavens near and far In dreams of two for nightly dwell Flow of the breeze, a weaver’s spell As touches raise to cheeks the flush and kisses leave a rose’s blush trembling hands searching grip one hold as once born love becomes twice bold Spring of the heart in fresh of bloom Crackling night’s fire, flickering room Dance of rose flames in petal’s hue sips of the sparkling vintage new In eyes the gaze of lust in sway strum to the heart, from mind’s portray Glean of the one, sensuous view gleam of the eyes saying... yes, do [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-02-2002 11:46 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...GORGEOUS, PASSION-FILLED poem with the blush of a rose touching the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Don't know how I missed this...in eyes the gaze of lust in sway... Woooow! I'm blushing! This was high impact. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Yes, do ! 'once born love becomes twice bold' Really liked this thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry a strum to the heart, for sure! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Glean of the one... indeed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quite. . . yes. . . well done Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart always blush with the fragrance of spring and be kissed by the summer rains of loves tears! (sigh) This blooms like spring, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy yet again you have written the perfect poem, flows like a dream, words etched in gold and the rhyme is utterly utterly divine. YOU know I love this one don’t you. Stunning piece of writing from you, utterly outstanding. The way you carried the theme through, so often your work is the epitome of style and form, In this you’ve written this so clearly so truthfully that the reader simply breathes in the scent of passion that rises from within this jewelled excellence Absolutely excellent writing here well done darling heart I did tell you that I utterly utterly love this didn’t I   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is wonderful, I can only dream such a happy outcome. Sandra |
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