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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-04-12 11:40 AM

Her limbs are bare with autumn
waiting for touch of spring
like stars blossoming in the sky
with gentle buds of joy
and light of promise to come
within foliage of her heart
thoughts of him
arranging petaled hair
over the pillow of a dream
cascading
waterfalls of bliss
overflowing
a bud vase
of scented memories
and a stem of hope
sweetening the air
like a bouquet
somewhere
in the ebony vase of night

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (04-13-2002 11:48 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-12 11:45 AM

(smiles) This is soooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, and may all her dreams come true and blossom like cherry trees and flower with the perfume of sweet love forever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-04-12 12:03 PM

very nice imagery here... with the sensual use of nature and normal to be envied

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-04-12 12:47 PM

like a bouquet
somewhere
in the ebony vase of night''

love this image....very much...Beautiful ~V~ hugsss

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-04-12 09:42 PM

Thank you Noah Ron and Lauren for peeking in...hugs to all

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 2002-04-12 10:10 PM

this is so sweet and tender...like a new bud itself..

K

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-04-12 10:35 PM

The spring holds much promise
and the air is so heavenly to breathe.
Like your poetry Victoria, it's
easy to get caught up in, letting it take us where it will.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-04-12 11:20 PM

within the foliage of her heart
thoughts of him
arranging petaled hair
over the pillow of a dream

I love the way you use words, Victoria...
this is exquisite

~springtime hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-04-12 11:34 PM

thank you severn lori and lyra..nice to hear from you all tonight...and thank you for your lovely comments..hugss

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2002-04-13 11:14 PM

victoria, just when i think i've read a favorite or two or three or four or more of your's my gosh you go and take my breath away and leave me in a silent pause of gentle sighssssss as I read this poem 2nite...
I gotta compliment you DearSweetPoetFriend cuz this one is EXQUISITE...
HugsNsmiles2u
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-13-2002 11:14 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-04-14 02:47 AM

Thank you so much for that lovely compliment...that inspires me to keep writing coco..hugss to ya..thank you for peeking in tonight..

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