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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-06-02 03:56 PM


Draw Me Poet

Draw me poet in line of this
Colour me in attitude of bliss
Show me pliant at your touch
Ready to give you kiss of such

Paint me poet colour my face
With touches of heated grace
Daub me with artistic skill
Show me what is your will

Sketch me poet with your sight
Draw me in shaded night
Paint my smile with fingertips
Glide over this with your lips

Draw me poet, poet etch me
Cover me in passion’s ecstasy
Sketch me in form and line
Show me in attitude sublime

Paint me poet colour me in
Shade me in the hue of sin
Colour me in a heated why
Paint me poet with your sigh

Draw me poet pull me to you
Feel the magic surging through
Dip your pen write my name
Paint me poet in lovers flame

Marsha





Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

[This message has been edited by Marsha (06-02-2002 03:58 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-02 04:10 PM




Now I wonder how many times
this little guy will appear...

Liking this...

ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-02 04:14 PM


Sure I will!
Can ya wait till I get some paint.
I might not be very good but I'll give it my very best
Aw heck it'll never live up to the quality of this poem....sorry!

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-06-02 04:16 PM


Marsha!  I absolutely love this!
One of my favourites from you.
Picture perfect!
~Hugs~

*I was going to put that little artist gif up...
but Sunshine beat me to it.*

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-06-02 04:56 PM


Goodness Mushy,  what is the temp over
there today?  Must be very warm after you
wrote this poem...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-06-02 05:15 PM


Marsha,
You are already a painting, anything extra would spoil the masterpiece.

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-06-02 05:18 PM


Marsha...You are a masterpiece, painted in many colors...but mostly pink



A very beautiful poem

*hugs to a beautiful painting*

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-06-02 07:07 PM


MarshaLove~
You sure live up to the *passion* we've come to know from you~


'Paint my smile with fingertips
Glide over this with your lips'


BEAUTIMOUS~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2002-06-02 07:26 PM


I'll paint a smile in rose pink bright
I'll paint eyes in the deepest of blue
I'll paint hair in yellow sun's light
I'll paint a rainbow, because that is you

You're beaming here girl, you're flowing like a star on sky's galaxy

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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9 posted 2002-06-02 08:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too was going to put up the painter image but I was beaten to it, oh well! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous work of art, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ecrivan
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10 posted 2002-06-02 08:56 PM


what a magic touch you have as always


catalinamoon
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11 posted 2002-06-02 10:36 PM


I like this lots, Marsha, being in love with an artist.
Sandra

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