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How Dare You???
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How Dare You??? |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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How dare you do this? How dare you break my heart? I didn't give you that right, you know Don't make me cry Don't make me hurt Don't make me hate you. I love you from the bottom of my heart Now you're throwing that love away. Why? Why are you doing this? How dare you make me hurt? I love you too much to lose you I want you forever and ever I can't grieve you properly right now Why did you choose now? How dare you make me hurt? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very well written expression love's pain. Love/hate sometimes seem to be like yin&yang. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww i realllllly hope this isnt your current situation! If so, I offer you the biggest hugs. These thoughts you've penned are the thoughts of every girl when she is being hurt by a guy. I remember when my first love dumped me for someone else and my first thoughts were "how could u do this to me" and "what does she have that I dont have"? Pain really makes some good poetry though, that's for sure. Be well my friend! (hugs) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes we can tell them not to do it and how dare they do it but when it comes right down to it they will do exactly what they want...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The unexpected shock of the hurt is well expressed in the anger and pain of your words. It's true, who gives anyone the right to mislead another and play with their feelings. This is why love is just a number to some cold hearted people. Good write! Emotions leap right off the page at the reader! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such real feelings which we all have felt... And there never is a right time for now, is there? I certainly don't know of a right time... Especially when you don't want to.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Skyfire~ Nice emote of your feelings~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How dare he indeed! Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Rhonda, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you for it saddens me to see so many hurt by this kind of pain. I just dream of being loyal to the girl I love so much, Joanna, and making her happy and only if I felt uncomfortable telling her how I felt and trying to settle differences! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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