Open Poetry #20 |
Unfinished..... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Heart broken Broken? No, just bruised Too many emotions Pounding upon Raging within.... It’s too damn early To have to replay Last night’s dream Over and over Seeing you in the rain Leaving it once again Unfinished Words unspoken Leaving my soul Submerged in ‘why’ My need to understand Hurts almost as much As this love for you That now I can only give In dreams ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs my friend... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Go back to bed, SEA, and finish the dream... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron, thank you Soleil, I woke up at around 3 am, getting back just wasn't an option....no matter how hard I tried... thank you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA sad and yet hopeful.. I live for the dreams enjoyed you here |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DS, I don't see any hope here....only missing someone in my heart...dreams sometimes can be really unfair, thank you |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, So here's to better dreams...and I'm sorry for your loss! Well done, btw. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggggssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for I dream of my dream girl Joanna all the time and I long to meet her and love her outside my dreams forever! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, may true love come to you always outside your dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Larry Noah, you are such a sweetie, thank you |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Dreams may be unfair, but is reality just as unfair sometimes? Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It’s too damn early To have to replay Last night’s dream There ya go, runnin' around my head again. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Romeo, yes, for sure....thank you Cowboy, it's only fair, you do it to me all the time thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
people like us need to give love to feel alive and complete. May you find someone who you can love outside of dreams...(and when you do, ask him if he has a brother for me) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beauiful sentiments of your heart sweetie...even though it was sad and made my heart cry for you...i know that as you continue to write of these feelings, your heart will begin to eventually feel the release of pain and you will smile once again...just watch and see. love ya. amy take care...and if you need a shoulder, feel free to talk to me. "you can't stop |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there is no rest for the 3 am ache ... no sleeping when it rolls in. only the muses and moths are up at that hour... at least youre in good company then. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ I know the haunting memories at that dreadful hour in the AM...too many times, to awaken knowing the dream was gone, yet hopeful the dream will live on in heart...Peace to you.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you sweet ladies.... that is an ache that will never die... *sigh* one day at a time, right? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling! Very well expressed Sue. ~Hugs~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
(((hugs))) me |
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