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June 1, 1870 From the Soddy Journal
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June 1, 1870 From the Soddy Journal |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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June 1, 1870 From the Soddy Journal Spring lies on the cusp of summer, morn breaks well though tepid air surrounds and Breeze, Breeze plays gaily, calling, “come dance with me,” and shall tease the children. He stands there, by lone cottonwood tree where redwings sing to him, as if counting seed on each head of grass or is his head bowed low in prayer… we’ve so much to be thankful for… we’ve so much to do… but Breeze takes away my breath the horizon is pearl with light, befitting a June dawn… sweet comes hint of rose, apt greeter of the day… in my coming to terms, I know, all that can break me remains in my ignorance, if I may but have one blissful morning under his hand. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And there ya have it... Happy Sunshiny June to you too....  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am so pleased I didn't miss this one! You KNOW how I do love these. This is beautiful Sunshine... filled with wonderful imagery. Thank you for my First of June read... ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is the most perfect poem to fit the magic of this first of June! (kiss on cheek) The magic of summer is on the horizon and I am so blessed to feel it, sweet friend, this poem is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah the beautiful poetic musings of a love dreamer This is pure poetic beauty......... "but Breeze takes away my breath the horizon is pearl with light, befitting a June dawn… sweet comes hint of rose, apt greeter of the day…" written like the seasoned poet you truly are! I don't know exactly what you do all day but it must be ideal! Well I have to go before the horizon gets ebony without light! Ta ta for now! |
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GypsyRose New Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 8Oklahoma |
What a wonderful spring poem. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for this tender spring bud. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love this and the series Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
These historical poems of yours are truly amazing. Love the final lines to this. Well done! I may not reply often here on Passions anymore, but that doesn't mean I don't read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I feel as though I were standing there next to that Cottonwood....head bowed, hair blowing around a hat, stained with sweat of the fields... So many things to do...so few to do it... God give me the strength... Beautiful words KJ....you have a way of reaching into me with your words that so easily paint the picture... |
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