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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-01 06:13 AM

Was Our
Love...
A Lie...

Don't say you love me
and then leave me.
Wouldn't that make
your words a lie?
If I can't trust you
who can I trust?
Will you look me
in the eye?
There is no problem
we can not work out if
you are willing to try.
Don't say you love me
and then leave me.
I don't want to believe
that our love was a lie.

JamesLee
June01
2002

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-01 08:38 AM

It seems so hard to make things work out just right. But hang in there, I bet she does.
Sandra

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

2 posted 2002-06-01 01:30 PM

For some, there will
always be that question..

nicely done, James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-01 01:45 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I know with a loving heart like yours you are incapable of lying to one who loves you, and your love should feel the same way if she can feel the way you do! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-06-01 03:03 PM

You're right James.....That's terrible if someone plays with another's emotions by indicating love anf then leaves....It's not right!!
Good poem!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-06-01 04:25 PM

Sometimes people confuse love with lust or infatuation. I hope everything works out the way you want it to sweetie.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-06-01 06:29 PM

enjoyed

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-06-01 08:03 PM

James darling boy sometimes we have to ask the question and hope the answer is the right one for our hearts. I hope everything works out darling heart.

This is wonderful writing I really love it the flow is superb, excellent work

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-06-01 08:05 PM

simple, straightforward and beautiful, James......
and I hope it isn't about you.

~ truthful hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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