Open Poetry #20 |
Nuance |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
In a nuance of affection A glimmer of your charm It?s enough to set me soaring And keep me safe from harm In the shadows of days duties Your gift eases my pain Your nuance of affection Thrills me through again Just a nuance of affection Just a tad and nothing more Can keep me ever smiling And fill me to me core Is a kiss in shadows daring? As you reach for me with love For the nuance of affection Fits me like hand in glove I don?t want passion rising Or a blazing funeral pyre But a nuance of affection Is enough to raise me higher If you hold my hand in winter And offer friendship?s lore Then a nuance of affection Gives me strength and so much more I don?t need overt kindness Don?t know the ways of lust Yet a nuance of affection Seals my heart and gains my trust In the morning when you leave me And you kiss me on the cheek Then that nuance of affection Leaves me smiling, filled and meek For a nuance of affection Says more than I can say But I offer this my promise With you I?ll always stay. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love the rhyme here and the feelings, very well done. it really doesn't take much, does it? |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I like what you have done ? with the question marks...adds a tremendous punch to the whole piece... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This makes me smile. Just a little true affection goes a long way. Nan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul may the stars catch you up in a net of wonder and the moons glow light your dreams, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. My soundless Oh of admiration, my breathy sigh would tell anyone who saw me that I’ve just been to the soul filling station and been re Kethed. This is another of your utter utter best darling heart. This is excellent and as always I love it. Is that a subtle nuance of affection I hear? The softly falling rain that covers my soul with Keth scented peace and delight? I think so beloved I really think so. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Yes, yes, may this fondness of love always be offered to your heart and keep you safe and comforted and fill your desires with warmth and happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Kethry, I like this a lot. ((Kethry)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-12-2002 08:56 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kethry, I love this! What you have done with the question marks? adds so much to this piece! Wonderful idea....wonderful poem! ~Hugs~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree, it's the simple sweet things that can make one's day. They have mine. *smiles softly and remembers* ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I loved the unexpected ? in this, a delightful nuance. Very cleverly written. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kethry~ Very nicely done.....well said... Lauren~ Step through the |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
long live those nuances of affection then... ..liked this! |
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